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Life Changing Mistake

Another drink
another memory
I never imagined
That girl would be me

Reflections of a time
Not so long ago
Remnants of echoes
Of the softly whispered “no’s”

A soul colored with guilt
A friend betrayed
A ghost lingers
Of an innocence slain

And still there are nights
That these eyes fill with tears
Unable to forget
The mistake of last year

Another drink
The same old memory
But I have changed
This is a brand new me

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  • this was a very powerful poem.I can relate to this poem alot..i also sensed alot of sadness and emotion in this poem..keep writting your very talented thanks for entering my contest and good luck