we'll eat sunbeams
and moon rocks
and blow kisses that bounce through the air
like those funny little astronauts
moonwalking in big boots
... and spacesuits
we'll watch the earth spin on without us
and smile
just you and me and you
alone on the moon
meet me on the moon
Author notes
"One Hundred Paintings - #80", Tim Biskup
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this piece has a great spirit about it - fun and energetic. i really like "and blow kisses that bounce through the air" in particular. nicely done.
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Oh I wanted to sigh so much here, this is how we all wish love could be, sharing that something that no one else has shared. You have a beautiful writing style. Mind if I add you to my faves. Best to you hun
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thank you so much!
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i remember reading this... this is so much fun. love the artwork too
just you and me and you
alone on the moon
sigh. love the repetition of you. i need to read more of your poetry and i need to bookmark this poem. -
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oh... thank you so much!
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nice, Dee, and funny picturing you in over-sized astronaut boots and moon-bouncing while being such a romantic... nice mental image, I shall file it away for future use... and hey, I see a 'honeymoon retreat' business opportunity looming ahead... spend your first night together in sub-earth gravity... oooooo... think of the possibilities... a moon resort...
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i could always resort to just plain "mooning" you!! hehehehe... once, twice, three times a lady, although gravity could help me out a little in the moon department these days - i am almost 34 you know
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maybe the moon will become the new 'Florida' (where many old couples go to retire here...) who knows, with less gravity, maybe people will live until they're 200...! (a good selling point for our moon resort)...
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'...and blow kisses that bounce in the air...'
That was so cute! And so romantic when you two are in a world of your own, letting the earth spin without you...Nicely written. =)
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so whimsical, so fun
nothing like spacesuits ( you don't even have to go to the bathroom to pee hehe)
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The imagery here is wonderful. Such feeling you portray here. Ah, there is nothing more beautiful than a silver moon, don't you think? I found this romantic too. Keep writing.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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oh, I really like this...love the imagery...nicely done!
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Baby I m missin u plz. Love me like u never had.if u reject me. I would just so sad
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What fun to read!
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Good, pure and child-like.
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this is funny and cute! a short but clever little write, another good piece lady..
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I think we could all use some moon time and astro boot kisses sometimes. You have such a whimsical and beautiful tone to your poetry. Lovely.
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why, thank you so much. i appreciate you dropping by
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This is made even cuter by the picture that is with it. Such a carefree innocent feel to it. I love when emotions are uncomplicated and pure, don't you?
Stacy
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omg this is so amazingly cute && adorable..
god i love it!!
great write!!!
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thank you so much xx
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An adorable, almost childlike piece. This feels almost like a piece meant to be read to a child, which is a cute touch. The flow was very good, and the well spaced rhyme scheme was effective.
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A great painting and I am beginning to see that your work has a sense of freedom to it. I'm faving you so I don't forget where you are.
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thank you so much for the lovely compliments! i'm chuffed you like what you've read. i don't really know what i'm doing half the time... i just go with the flow. looking forward to checking out your page too
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mm, i loved this poem! (: you have true talent, it practically beams through this poem! great great job. (:
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thank you
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perhaps though a date on the moon would not be so happy and smiling, i believe that there is no atmosphere to the place! a good poem
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hahaha.. very good but i AM the atmosphere, my friend. i can send kisses in astronaut suits! what more could a man want?? xx
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to have a date on the moon itself
smiling at this idea...lovely
although I was wondering about the
astronaut attire
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i can hold my breath for an awfully long time. i'd risk taking my helmet off to steal a kiss or two, for the right man of course
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ditto...
a minute or two...would feel like a light year experience
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