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The Tiny Children...

They cried... for how long I don't know
I was not paying attention.

But we never pay much attention, do we?
And when will we learn from these
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Becau$3 Th3r3 w@s jsut so much more to learn....

What is the meaning?

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  • FreeFalling911
    April 3

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    amazing

    I really like that you put a question in your poem. We really don't pay much attention. That seems to be the very thing that always gets us into trouble. It's a simple poem, thats what makes it so great.


  • Beautiful Sin-
    April 2

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    I just think it was a little much at the end. The $s and 3s and all the great stuff... But it was a lovely poem, dear!


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    April 2
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    Great job


  • white stone
    April 2

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    I'm trying to figure out this "Dirty Pretty" thing. This is pretty cool. Kind of like T.S Eliot did weird stuff with his structuring... God I feel so old...lol

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