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Cherries, Bunnies and Blood

"One quick peek, I promise it won't hurt.
That tooth has to come out honey."
I winced as he moved it around.
Then concentrate on the picture above, a bunny.

"Why would there be a bunny on the ceiling?"
I ask him aloud, still confused.
"It's to keep you from thinking about the pain."
He smiled, more than amused.

A yank and a pull later,
that stubborn tooth was out.
Then it was time for the floride.

I could do nothing but pout.

 

Sweeping across my teeth,

cleaning them this way and that.

I stayed quiet and looked at that bunny,

not wanting to be a brat.

 

Once it was all done,

I ran my tongue across my teeth.

Cherries, it tasted like cherries!

And nothing like the tooth underneath.

 

I sat up in the dentist's chair.

My gum still bleeding.

I was finally done.

It was time for us to be leaving.

 

Walked out of the dentist office,

thinking it was quite funny.

That I'd never forget blood,

cherries, and the look of that bunny.

 





 

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AP Name: Toxic.Suicide. Favorite Color: RAINBOW! Favorite Number: 35 Random Word: Moobleberry.
Moobleberry: When you forget what you were going to say but you remember that it's imporatant. Then you go home and lay on the couch watching movies and eating cookies to get rid of your sadness.

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  • Megan. I looooved this. :] I enjoyed every second, even the displeasing moments. You used my word! The deffinition is wrong though >_>. It's "When you forget something you know is important. Then you get high and crash on the couch with cookies and watch Wow Wow Wubbzie, Dora The Explorer, or any other odd shows as such." :]!!! >_> And "Midnight-x-Roses", it's not Moodleberry. D: It's MOOBLEBERRY. D: I LOVE YOU MEGAN xD!

  • Ooooh nice poem.
    Moodleberry, never heard of it but thanks for the efinition, sounds like a clever word indeedy

    • ToxicSuicide
      April 6
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      Lol, thanks. It's not a true word, it's something me and my friends came up with after awhile. I just felt the need to put it there though.

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