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Don't Miss Her Until

I don't miss her until I see her face.
The face that shines as bright as a billion stars.

I don't miss her until I hear her voice.
The voice that sounds as sweet as a million harps.

I don't miss her until I smell her scent.
The scent that entices even the strongest man.

I don't miss her until I taste her words.
The words that seduce my very soul.

I don't miss her until I feel her glide past me.
The feeling that my heart disappears as she does

I don't miss her until I sense her presence.
The very presence that puts me into a trance.

I don't miss her until...

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  • FreeFalling1221
    April 3

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    i love it.... it tells alot about your feelings you had for her. umm i have one thing though maybe this should be a little longer... i mean i love it and its simple and shirt but more would make it breathless.. details. kk hun. i love it


    • nonsexynerd
      April 5
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      Well help me make longer.

      • FreeFalling1221
        April 5
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        i can't help you make it longer... You have to do it by yourself... Feel the emotions, Feel the pain between the lines, write what you feel, the way you touch her, the way she shines when she walks by... hun you got it you just need to let it go... Fly onto the screen, flow throw your fingers onto the keyboard.....


  • EndlessNameless
    April 1
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    i LOVE the way you leave it open up to all the different possibilities. it's unlimited.