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My Heart In Your Hands

 

 

 

I'll jaunt through the fire, the waters and sands,

Careen to your temple, my heart in your hands.

I'll perplex all apparitions and all disbelief,

Fortify your worth and exorcise your grief.

 

The perpuity before us conspires to be hard,

Yet with love and devotion, we're blessed in that regard.

The agonising times, together we'll get through,

Leading to a happiness long-overdue.

 

My minds eye captures your face, I begin to blush,
Cold life, warm love, embracing the rush.

No matter the inclination of our superior fate,

I'll always say that "You're worth the wait".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Meroza
    April 27

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    This is too adorable. Such a perfect ending and every word so filled with emotions and such deepness. I am amazed by your talent, my raven.
    Thank you for entering


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    April 23

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    Awe, sometimes it is always worth the wait
    but there is always the times it isn't you just have to know which one to choose. This poem was excellently written and i enjoyed reading it.
    good luck, thanks for entering


  • awannabepoet
    April 3

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    True love

    It is of true love that you speak so eloquently that one's heart would skip a beat if they were so lucky as to have this little poem be for them and them alone.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • untouched pages
    April 3

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    I found this write leading me down emotional roads I haven't been down for some years. I found that is was as if you were holding my heart and speaking the words to me. That just blew me away. I'm almost speachless... thank you!


  • MuteForNow
    April 3
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    oh my gosh! beautiful. pretty much just made my day. thanks for writing back to me on that one.


  • abybaby
    April 3

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    really great work brother....loved the feelings in the last para sayin "you are worth the pain"
    beautifully describing the love and pain behind a long distance relationship or a breakup

    cheers
    abybaby


  • lostsouls12
    April 2

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    i am just so lost in your words. its like my own lil escape from the pain i feel inside. when loneliness strikes all i need to do is read one of your poems and i feel so loved. you are an amazing writer and i am glad to call you my friend.


  • Veritas De Facto
    April 1

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    I really like this one. It's very simple and easy to understand. Your use of eloquent words is the sign of quality work and I appreciate the brevity of the poem. The fact that you can set it up, say it, and then conclude in three short stanzas is a beautiful and skillful art. The last line is of particular interest to me, a wonderful little token to leave off with. Great writing in my opinion. Imagery here is abstract, but not difficult to see.

  • Flying Phoenix
    April 1
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    Your poem flows eloquently. It spoke to me, especially the last line. It was a great poem.


  • FreeFalling911
    April 1

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    True love

    I can totally understand every word that you are saying within this poem and it is breathtaking


  • albymyheart gold member
    April 1

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    Melt material!!

    Oh, I think anyone would wait for you if you gave them this poem. This is a truly masterful write on the feelings of love. Great to see these words flowing from you...alby


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    April 1

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    My minds eye captures your face, I begin to blush,
    Cold life, warm love, embracing the rush.

    No matter the inclination of our superior fate,

    I'll always say that "You're worth the wait".

    I love this verse....it hold so much meaning and you have definitely captured my attention. Whoever this young woman is, she is lucky to have someone like you to love her. Great job and thanks for sharing.


  • geckogirl silver member
    April 1

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    Del to be in love like this worth the wait, hopefully one day soon she will return the love to you soon...
    Much Love
    Sue


  • AllOverItNow
    April 1
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    loved it

    very moving, passionate, yet tender

    thanks for sharing ^-^


  • maralisa silver member
    April 1
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    aw a beautiful love poem thank you for sharingmaralisa


  • Kathraina silver member
    April 1

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    OMG, this speaks to me so much right now.
    Lovely write my friend, the passion and love here is astounding. Bravo!


    ♥ Kate


  • Delete---
    April 1

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    I know who this is for =] wonderful poem sweetheart, you always write the best love poems.
    All my poetic love,
    Kitty xx

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