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Hide Me Not?

But say you had a restoration
in the area right here.
And consider when the enamel
will become harder and harder until
nothing can ever penetrate the fortress.

Take the time to go
and watch closely
when the ticket hits the thicket.

Holding fold and playing the game-
pretending I'm not hurt by all that you
fade me into the windy hollows...

And why should I,
care? I


    only love with a simple and kind heart.

Does that make me vain and can you tell me apart?

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