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Anniversary



That day when my emotions ran wild,

When I knew you were the one,

As I got down on my knee,

And spoke these words to you,



"I love you will you marry me"

While I always remember the joy of that day,

And the smile that took over your face,

The days the followed after, I would never replace,



The first day of our marriage I can never forget,

And the hours passed that filled my heart with joy,

Or the minutes that ticked with you in my arms,

Loving you with all my internal being, 



You make each and every day like a journey,

That we take together hand in hand,

Step by step you're right there by my side,

Through the path of love only we can make,



As the days turn to months my love still holds true,

Remembering the day I proposed my love to you,



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Okay this is something I wrote when I was at my prime jk but it was from my heart and I think sharing with you shall be my pleasure!!!!

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  • trekkergirl
    April 30
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    Well my husband actually proposed while driving a mini van down the road. He said the words then grabbed me and kissed me. He said later that we was afraid that I would say no. I said well at least he could have let me up for air. And that I had no intention of saying no. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into this contest.