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I'm Sorry

I can feel their eyes,
see those sideways glances.
Each mind questioning me,
are you okay?
What has happened to make you this way?
They think I'm broken,
but I just have a few holes.
They can be patched right up,
with those two little words,
I'm sorry.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 30
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    Very well written

    I found this poem so true and you have such depth for all to read