locked
all energy draining
doors flying past
running until i finaly find it
the one door left open
slowly losing myself
trapped into a matrix born from my mind
grabbing at anything
trying to hold on
no handholds in sight
slipping further into darkness
thinking of forbidden thoughts
screaming into the light
shunning all who try to help
save me from my mind
killing off what's left
while trying to find the key
doors slamming
as each new choice is made
i have lost my way
locked inside a white padded room
with only my mind to save me
with only my mind to jail me
Author notes
Written March 2nd, 2004
A contest entry
- Slipping by someoneweknew.
300 points, ended April 17, 2004, 40 entries
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Woh i dont know what to say... but this poem def. kicked sum major ass! It really paints a wonderful picture, - i know what it's like to be mentaly lost, and you discribed this feeling well.
-best of luck
Shad -
You should read my Traped. It like this poem and once you read it you will understand how I fee. You dont have to comment if you want I'm not trying to promote, but if you think your the only on who feels like that your wrong. lol. Evybody does.
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thankies for your reply, i am glad u ccan relate, i feel locked in my mind, glad im not the only one.........
so-chan
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Very good. I gives me a picture to go by. I totally can relate!!!
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