The Fire-flame Bird
made out of fire
that hold it's spot
as the bird that will rise
out of it's ash
the Queens in China
are know as Phoenix
the Phoenix will never die
they'll ash of their ash
as the mythical animal holds
it's spot no one will forget
her
the Phoenix that rise
from her ashes
Author notes
hehe my favorite mythical animal is the phoenix so it will make sense too!
A contest entry
- The Phoenix by Forgotten Anomaly.
700 points, ended April 6, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
u like Phoenixs?
Comments
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Yes, I do like phoenixes, I held the contest for them. This poem is interesting but needs a little bit of work none the less. I'd recomend spell checking this and not repeating the word fire twice in the first two lines. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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