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Rabbit hole.

 

 

 

 

I am falling into a rabbit hole of kaleidoscope colors

suffering from curiosity that eats at my stomach lining

I quiver in fear of tumbling over my blanket of butterfly wings

so ungraceful in this new world with no gravity to fill my lungs

dandelions whisper on the breeze that flies over my goose bumping arms

I am dizzy with poker chips in my hands & playing cards on the table

hoping for a jack pot, dieing on arrival, terrible trouble, I'm late!

Invisible faces purr & cackle for me to save her, quick

unstable on my feet, I glide on the wind, off to rescue Alice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Candy Morphine
    April 2
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    Invisble
    -Spelt wrong?

    suffering from curiosity that eats at my stomach lining
    -Gah i really like that bit. Something about it is very intriguing.

    I quiver in fear of tumbling over my blanket of butterfly wings
    -Yet that is even better! the choice of words and metaphors is crazy-good.

    This is a very cool poem! :]


  • Atrophya
    April 1
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    hahha, i inspired you xD