Insanity takes effect,
and darkness crosses
my mind,
like a sun set
across an ocean.
The waves of darkness,
hit me,
like a wave in the ocean.
I lose my mind.
What way is up,
what way is down,
where am I,
who am I?
Insanity takes control,
I am not myself,
I would need to know,
who I am,
before I know what I am.
The darkness seeps in,
past the castle walls.
life has never been
what one has planned.
The lights fade,
darkness takes control,
with the darkness
comes insanity,
soon we become beyond help,
soon,
soon we all die.
In this world of lies
and insanity,
there is only one law,
that stands forever.
How that law is taken,
is the only thing that changes.
And then the world is doomed
Author notes
This is part four of many, when i am done with all of it, i will post the completed poem all together
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Part one: ɯıɹɹoɹ (mirror): http://allpoetry.com/poem/5170853
Part two: maze: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5177221
Part three: gears: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5180201
Part five: back to basics: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5200361
Part six: the last set: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5200425
All together: to hell and back: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5200445
What did you think
Comments
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This reminds me of the intro to an epic fantasy movie. My first thought is, “if we’re going to survive, some will have to do something”. Maybe there is not way to survive in the world you present. Hmmm.
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Obviously I started reading at the wrong point if this is part 4, but I really like this, "how that law is taken, is the only thing that changes" really strikes a chord with me for some reason.
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