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Danger

Hazard
wraps your soul with greed
run awway run away
sreams the soul

saddness

stop it
step back
its melting into your brain
sudden outburst
desire
let it out
let it go

anger

a human destroyer
conqurer of all
can't be removed
without realizing

pride

In the wars
in the slavery
In the rivers

Don't fall
don't fall

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  • nichtmich silver member
    April 2

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    Suspenseful and full of insights into the train wreck we call human nature. I especially like the last two lines, they are like a blinking red warning light. Great read.