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Filled with the malice
from that evil, passion kiss
she stands filled with rage.

Time stands still for her
but he can still save his love
will time stand for him?

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Pic credit goes to Shadow Hearts: From the New World.

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  • I very much enjoyed this particular write and i loved the ending with a question, it really left me speechless!

  • Passionate! X

  • I love the pic and the words.. you explained the passion in this piece well.. well done


  • drumdog79
    April 2

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    Three was the only one I played but I loved it. Funny this would be the poem I clicked on. Nice Ku's, love those things.


  • islekine gold member
    April 1

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    Out of my era...

    But nicely penned!
    Write on!


  • Kathraina silver member
    April 1
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    Good job on this piece.

  • J Macabre gold member
    April 1
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    Oh man i love those games!
    I have all of them!
    Part one was my all time fav though.
    Battle system in part 2 was great as well!

    That's kool you wrote about Shania!

    • Heroesrox
      April 1
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      Oh, meant to tell you my fave characters.

      1. Keith, Alice and Margarete
      2. Lucia and Anastasia
      3. Hilda and Ricardo

      My most fave video game characters EVER are Hilda and Lucia.

    • Heroesrox
      April 1
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      I own all three of them as well. SInce the very first one is rare in America, I thought that I would not get it, but my best friend, Rebekka, had it. She sold it to me for $15. I got the second game for free and FTNW for $12.00. I love Shadow Hearts more than any other game series. Thanks so much for your comment.

      • J Macabre gold member
        April 1

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        As cliche as this'll sound my fav has always been Yuri. i like his story and character a lot.
        i incorporate a similar idea of his fusion ability and struggle into some of my writing.
        Other characters i liked alot were Zhuzhen, Haley, and Alice,Blanca, and Joachim.

        • Heroesrox
          April 1
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          Oh, did you ever play the PS1 game that is Shadow Heart's predecessor? It's called...........KOUDELKA!!!

          (Haley's Momma....)

        • Heroesrox
          April 1
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          Joachim was too weird for me. I liked him allright, though. My least faves in Covenant were Blanca and Kurando. I hated them....lol.. Sorry!

          Yuri is cool. Zhuzhen was awesome, as well. As with Blanca, I despised Haley...lol.

          I really am sorry that two of your faves were my least faves. I play the series still quite a bit. I am currently playing Covenant again for the 12th time since I have owned it. (I got it back in 2006-ish.) I am also playing FTNW again. (9th time I think....lol)

          • J Macabre gold member
            April 1
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            Don't need to apologize for having different taste in characters. As much as Joachim was weird that's what i liked about him lol Plus to me he was useful in battles.

            Karando i agree with...he was too sword-sy for me...im not a sword samurai ninja kind of guy.

            Blanca i liked because i like wolves and such and i liked how his personality was intelligent even though no one could understand him.

            Haley i just liked his magic...to me was better then the hooker-ish Margarete lol

            • Heroesrox
              April 1
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              Believe it or not, my party right now is Karin, Joachim, Gepetto and Lucia. Lucia never leaves my party when I play Covenant like in FTNW, Hilda never leaves my party.

            • Heroesrox
              April 1
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              LOL! Margarete was not a hooker! lol. Made me laugh! She was comical as hell, though!

              I like her move when the big glasses fall down.
              "Hmm...Let's see!"

  • awesome write bro...


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 1

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    Another thought riviting piece
    short and to the point
    love the word Malice.. speaks volumes
    Best wishes Julie x


  • Mr. Grey
    April 1
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    Great piece, and awesome addition to your Shadow Hearts collection.


  • campanaro silver member
    April 1

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    wow!!

    Loved this!!
    Excellent write..
    Everything was put together so well.
    Great job here bro.
    Take care
    Love Peace
    campanaro

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