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Made me laugh when I didn't even want to smile
you brought me happiness like no other
made my whole life seem worthwhile
even when noone liked me and you together, except for my home girl and little brother

We still stuck together
and dealt with all tha shit
mind, emotions, and body taking most of tha hit
didn't let it phase us no more than we let tha weather

Somewhere near tha end
something happened it didn't mesh
felt like it was being ripped out along with tha flesh
seems like it won't ever mend
or bend and blend together again

The intent never made a sound
surely made its round
and soon enough was found
going to do my best so I'll never again be this torn down

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