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Feel Me

Feel me...

When the gentle breeze softly brushes over your cheek,
It's me, gently caressing you with love.

When the sun wraps you up in it's warmth,
It's my arms, embracing you, holding you tight.

When you gaze intently upon a beautiful flower,
It's me, staring back, lost in your eyes.

When you hear the birds singing sweetly their song,
It's my laughter, echoing on the wind.

When you see the ripples on the surface of a pond,
It's me, and my love growing for you everyday.

When you feel that mysterious touch when no one is there,
It's me, reaching out for you and wanting your closer.

When you see butterflies dancing through the air,
It's me, giggling and laughing, giddy in love.

When you have that chill and suddenly shiver,
It's me, seeking your warmth, because I'm cold too.

When you look at things you've always known, suddenly in awe,
It's me, seeing new sights through your eyes, excited.

When you watch the sun rise or set and become overwhelmed,
It's me, drowning in the love I have for you.

When a sweet fragrance suddenly cascades over you,
It's me, as I whisk past, beckoning you to follow.

When you lie there, imagining you can feel me cuddled up to you,
It's me, pressed into your back, breathing you in.

When you hear the words to a song and your heart starts to race,
It's me, searching for a way to tell you that I love you.

When the rain begins to fall all around you,
It's me, crying softly because I miss you.

Feel me...

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 24

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    mmmm...

    i feel you in this sweet tenderly penned and warming to the heart piece..yeah, i felt you..excellent work!

  • wow and oww! i know how that feels , you kind of took the words right out of my mouth..... it was wonderful

  • Chris D
    May 23
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    A thing of beauty

    A wonderful expression of caring in all its aspects. Great work.

    Chris


  • Aalta silver member
    May 23
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    its beautiful ...in one word...
    great write... write on

    cheers

  • forget these little dudes...x

  • WOWO

  • WOWO


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    May 22

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    Beautiful, soulful write. I especially like the categories you've chosen: ripples and butterflies and laughter....its enchanting and a wonderful way to express that connection,


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    May 11

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    Ooooooooooooooopoh this is so beautiful full of love and happiness. Awsome write. Thank you for sharing this with me and it was a pleasure to read.

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