When you whip me
With your words
I cry out but
You never seem to
Understand what I
Am saying to you
You just keep
Whipping me
over and over again
When you come to an end
You fall down on
Your knees and
Cradle me
In your arms
Asking for forgiveness
And every time
I welcome you back
Into my life
Ready for another beating
Please tell me what you think
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hi, I guess this poem could be much shorter, more concentrated so to speak...keep learning new words, to cover new thoughts...is this a love-poem or one about friendship? What I see is this: why do I allow to misuse myself by you? I can be wrong.....
Your bro, Erwin
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you don't exactly write only about cuddling either
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What do u mean
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dont no i forgot
lolz
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