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Hiding in my hands

Hiding in my hands
scared of what might await me
not sure I want to be part of the world
not sure I want to leave childhood
not sure this is the right thing to do
and not sure I fit
not sure this is the right place for me
a little bit of insecurity
a little bit of regret
not a drop of hope
just full on fear
So I'll just stay here
I'll just wait
I'll keep hiding in my hands
until all my worries drift away

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If you like this poem I have another poem called protection that is about the same thing (kinda)

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  • "a little bit of insecurity
    a little bit of regret
    not a drop of hope
    just full on fear"

    excellent words. you've got 2 points for this poem giving you a total of 13 points. great work. thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy