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my world of words

iam the ever writing pen
that  scribbles over time
gliding in the sky
touching the stars
and kissing the flowers

i think in ink
speak with my pen
and see with my heart

if you seek for me
you will find me in my words.

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  • Emerald-Eyes
    April 4
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    Beautiful write, would just change the i to I
    Well done and thank you!


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    April 2

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    Awww... this is beautiful...

    Just one thing, with the first word is it meant to be I'm.

    A wonderful write...

    Kate