I sense evil within these walls
light summons me
my heart cringes
body trembles uncontrollably
I feel death upon me
scratching my spine
squeezing at my heart
making me gasp for breath
darkness surrounds me
as I slowly shatter within
Author notes
40 Words
Prompt: http://s129.photobucket.com/albums/p216/Jayson0826/?action=view¤t=Losg.jpg
A contest entry
- 1 pic, 1 quote, 1 word by Never.Give.Up.
400 points, ended April 2, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bronze I by Salty Hibiscus.
525 points, ended April 11, 22 entries
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Comments
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Wow, i think I held my breath all the wway through that...
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kate
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this makes me gasp! excellent imagery!
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mysecondchance is right babe! your erotica is hot!! thats by far your best work! well keep it up!
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I love this but I must say and im being honest your calling is erotica, but this was damn good man keep it up.
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oooh very chilling. excellent take on the prompt!!! Best wished to you in the contest. 
Delila
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Very good!!
a good free verse and so discriptive of feeling surrounded by evil. good luck w/the contest. this is short but Very strong.
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