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Cinder Shadow

Sitting at the bottom
A basin deep and cold
Something stirs from the mirth within me

Glistening new eyes
Drawing away miasma
I sing to the Gods of insanity

The life
The will
Conduit of ascension
A flame
Misfired
Radiates pretension

He touches me
It Burns

A pulsar in my mess
Causing frenzy anew
On fists and knees I pray

Hands clapping inside
With every strike a match
Hot feet can’t stray

Straining jaws
Like a corpse I saw
The smell of hair braised gold
Tongue whipping teeth
I hear him speak

You’ve been saved

Do what you’re told

He touches me
It Burns

It Burns

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 8

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    A play to light and sound,
    to pounding images,
    intensity, all around.

    This demands attention!

    Kudos

  • The intimacy and its scenario brings the original touches of the connection..love the love for HIM..thanks for sharing..

  • Excellent

    It is a very fine write, indeed. You have expressed yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.