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Ashes Of The Architect

I stand in front of the energy of the crowd
the life emanating from the people is to astound
i pick up my guitar and we say who we are
the crowd screams each name they know all the stars

we start the show with a violent explosion
the music is blazing the crowds showing emotion
shrill screams of ecstasy pierce the nights embrace
we play on never losing our pace
we keep the life flowing through the morning hours
the feeling is pure it could never end

There is no copy cats cause we ARE the trend

The show comes to a close, people screaming ENCORE!!!
I turn round, look her in the eyes and ask "One more?"
She smiles at me and starts a beat
we raise the curtain, we raise the heat.
The life is a fusion of dancing and screaming
then suddenly Im ripped from the scene,
Realising to my distaste it was all just a dream.

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  • endedintears
    April 2
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    Thanks

    Thanks peoples

  • cornfield
    April 1
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    captivatingly moving

  • Awesome.


  • Linaness
    April 1
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    Haha I like the last stanza.

  • Linaness
    April 1
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    Nice Vocab

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