I never felt love, until sunshine touched my whispers;
The taste of your lips is sweet, like love
and I swear I never knew trust before your heart,
held mine close and promised mine forever
and I swear to any God who will listen to me,
my lips are yours and only yours, I'll break you never.
Sometimes I lay in bed thinking of perfection,
trying so hard to find a perfect definition, but now
I know that beauty is only in the one who brightens your soul
and no other man could ever most such a sensation and I know,
that when you're not laying next to me I am incomplete
and when I feel as if the world is dying, all I see is you.
I'm safe in your arms and holy in your kisses, I wish I could
just turn back time and make you the one I always wished for.
It took so long to find you, but the past made stronger
and you are the only one who I can trust with any human wrong.
I made mistakes that only Angel's could forgive me for and you,
were the Angel that touched my heart, helped me out and brought me through.
Sometimes I ask myself why I'm so lucky to be loved by someone like you
and you tell me that I'm the same, someone compassionate, loving and true.
No other person would I believe, but you make me see
that perhaps there is some human nature in the best of me.
If someone tells me that love is wrong, I'll disagree.
I will never regret the feelings I have for you
and you'll search so far to find a girl who'll love you like me.
I know I am not the best and that you are not as well,
but you are the one who captured me in a simple moment
and brought me back from the deepest hell.
I love you more than the sound of sleep
and the kisses that babies land on your cheek.
The softest mention of your name, is bliss
and when the lights go out you know it's you I miss.
/When smiles are gone, you know mine will stay along
as I know you'll be back for me soon, this is the end
of what I've wanted to say and have held in so long.
I love you Angel and no matter what my heart doubts,
my love for you will be full and never doubted, I love you
and I know I can rely on your love, as long as I can carry on.
Author notes
I trust him with anything
he is the only one who can even make me even THINK about liking myself.
I love you sweetheart, I really do.
Thank you x
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Comments
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JUDGED!!!
This said just about everything that has to do with "Love" Such a soft and tender piece, very nicely penned poet!!!
Hope this person you speak of realizes this aswell.
Thanks for entering and all the best to you
Ken♣ -
This is very pretty and carries a lot of strong emotion with it. Interesting choice of rhymes in places...
Thank you for entering this into my contest.
--Jaded.
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until sunshine touched my whispers
-Aww, that's just so pretty.
I'll break you never
-The way this is worded makes it revel in such certainty.
but you are the one who captured me in a simple moment
-Amazing.
I love you more than the sound of sleep
-How do you come up with this? Honestly; that is adorable.
Oh god, i really do hope you win. -
Very sweet, very beautiful and about time you started realising some things, like you have in this piece.
Good write.






