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Healing a Broken Heart

I wasn't all there
Lost in my mind
You talked to me
Brought me back

I was a mess
Trusting no one
You touched me
Earned my trust

I lived in fiction
Never seeing things
You saw me
Opening my eyes

I lived in the dark
Feeling that it was safer
You came to me
Light following you

I came back
I trusted you
Saw the real world
My heart healed

As long as I have you
I can be real again
Be alive and whole
Feel safe and happy

Be honest and tell me what you think.

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  • theVIP
    April 1

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    It very well could be a song so I would put it under lyrics if I were you. I think that it was amazing t othe point were there is no need to improve.