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something real.

doctor-
pass me the scapel
i'd like to cut my heart out
myself
i need to feel something thats finnaly real
not this fantasy world
living is my only challenage
and dieing is my reward.

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  • nichtmich silver member
    April 1

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    Ohhh! I like it, but it's soooo bleak and hopeless! You've captured the mood very well. Chilling, that's the word I'm looking for.