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Deadly Eyes

With eyes so blue that its almost transparent
Looking at you with contempt
Those deadly eyes
That make you fall back a step
You want to run
to hide your behind
than let those deadly eyes look at you

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  • azlyn gold member
    April 1
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    That deadly stare...so consuming. Very interesting write!



    Az