crazed as sin
she stroked her face
with paints
preparation begins
red stains
under her eyes
represents his blood
blood spilled tonight
after he left her cold
and alone again
lips shaded black
meant for death
as she turns to
stab him
Author notes
Prompt: http://miss-deathwish.deviantart.com/art/bloodbandit-117713481
Contest Shatter My Soul, Let My Heart Ache
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What did you think
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An unfaithful lover eats cold steel. I love it. The subtle madness and warpaint before the deed...beautiful.
Thanks for entering. -
great poem
the picture looks great...
i was shock to see it...
LOL...
overall your poem is well written and amazing poem
thanks for the entry
"the power of darkness"
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Dark
Wow good n' dark. great penning. Best wishes in the contest.
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Yay! You're really a genious. I love your style and the way the words flow. I also like that the poem is short but dynamic. You're definitely a finalist.
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wow! very nice spin on something so dark the word choice is excellent as well as the imagery making for a great piece
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Wow,
"blood spilled tonight
after he left her cold
and alone again"
This was really good,
I liked the picture too
Thank you for entering my contest
And good luck
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Wow - Powerful
Hell has no fury like a PO'ed woman
you have nailed her so well - hope you life to survive it - lol
Good Luck in the contest
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Wow, very dark and evil
yet beautifully portrayed.
Well suited for the picture too.
Thanks for entering & best of luck -
Man that was bitchin!
I loved all the symbolism in that.
Pretty good female perspective too. -
that's sick.
very cool poem bro.
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Dark, ominous, from the other side..Certainly gets the attention! Aunty
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wow what an incredible write !
your story line and flow is brillant! Bravo
not to mention very dark and I like it!
Blessings
Rend
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Very haunting words. Fabulous take on the prompt!!!
♥ Kate -
wow what a brilliant write
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great take on the prompt
best of luck to you
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