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A friend or more?

I can't tell you
Because I don稚 want to lose you
I prefer having you as I do
Then having space between me and you
I am afraid, [of what you値l think] so I値l keep it a secret
I guarantee its just not another regret 
Until one day I値l have the courage
And no fear
To tell you how I really feel
I値l meet your eyes
and they値l tell me what痴  on your mind
That you also Love me dear
And then there値l be no fear

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  • laimra
    June 29
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    cool. What writing style is thid? (im still trying to figure them all out! but its really good.