Hold my dreams for me,
tightly in your safe.
Carry my thoughts for me,
for it's not safe to be awake.
I treasure your absurdities,
your subtleties in life.
I want you to take me away with you,
to tell me it will be alright.
Have you ever wondered,
why this planet is lined with so many lives
for a great deal of them to be alone?
Still your grace and masculinity,
could save from me wasting
these days could have more to be shown.
I close my eyes
and I see you, I do
I open my eyes
only to once again,
bid you adeau.
For you are merely a man I made,
you exist solely for me.
Only to meet the one whom embodies,
the pieces which make you complete.
I meet you in my dreams
I can feel you in my heart
True love lies somewhere here
Although I wake up, alone - in the dark
And I know you love me too,
I just wonder if you are real.
For dreams to become reality,
my own magic for this pain to heal.
Here I send the message that I am waiting,
patiently here for you to come
Capture my soul with your very stare,
allow my dreams and life, to become one.
A contest entry
- [ Anything Goes ] by HereComesTheSun.
1100 points, ended April 22, 151 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I have Fallen... in Love by WhiteGirl.
750 points, ended June 1, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Melt by Diminished Capacity.
770 points, ended July 14, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this piece and the whole idea of wanting your dream to become real. It flowed nicely and had a nice beauty to it. Thank you so much for entering.
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how sweet is
it is to be loved, your pen has done nicely, good luck in all you do and thanks for sharing this delightful piece!
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Very nice. I think everyone at some point has a dream love. Someone to make them feel loved. Your poem captured that feeling nice job!
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The content was nice, I preffered the title, this just wasn't what I was looking for, hence why I stated that I preffered newly written poems.
Thank you for taking the time to enter
Kind regards
Sophie
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Now i have to say..
you title alone pulled me in..it made me think it was a 'response' piece to a poem i wrote which i titled: I LOVED YOU IN MY DREAMS..l.o.l. this is very nice..much luck to you in the contest..
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So good! Loved it.
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one of the best rhyming pieces i have read you did a very good job, just overall with this and the emotion and depth pulled into this piece.
thanks for entering -
beautifully written heartfelt Hugs Angel♥
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Aww this was deeply heartfelt
and pulled me into your words
as if I was there myself.
Many beautiful emotions
expressed throughout.
A most fine read!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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beauitful.very well writte
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this is absolutely beautiful. I adore this piece... I admire how you capture your emotions especially these kinds are the fleeting and elusive ones
beautiful poetry
bookmarked
belle
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Your comment is much appreciated, I thank you. It's hard to know that there is someone for you to love out there, you just haven't met them yet - but in your dreams ( : I am flattered that you enjoyed it enough to keep it!
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A beautiful array of images in a gorgeous poem....i loved it!
Lovely work...you have a talent!
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Aww, I'm actually blushing : ) I am just very grateful to have the ability to share it with others, and get feedback as well. It's nice to know when others appreciate your thoughts ! Thank you
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This one was really good. I thought you did a great job with the way you described the dream.
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Why thank you very much ( : It was easy to write, I had just watched Twilight - and was jealous! haha
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great write
great job...i enjoyed the read
great way to explain a dream person who you love
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well written my friend - certain lines made me think of someone very dear and special to me and the completeness i end up feeling thanks to him within my many thoughts . well done and many blessings always xxx
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