When will you grow up?
I'm tired of your childish games
You dance around my personal space, like a demon
Picking at every little thing that's wrong with me
You're posessed!
Who died and gave you the authority to judge?
Are you perfect?
Hell no!
Not even close...
You're nothing but a wolf in sheep's clothing
You present yourself as so high and mighty
But you're a person just like everyone else
Riddled with insecurities, fears, and emotions
You think I'm made of stone?
I have feelings too!
I bleed just like everyone else
I can prove it...
Look at my scars
Look at what you've done!
You pick and pick and pick at my faults
Only to hide your own shortcomings
Author notes
I was having a terrible day today. People are so immature sometimes. I was able to channel my emotions into this, and make it about everyone who has picked at me thoughout my life. Enjoy!
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i think it is very clear here, your frustrations. things we all feel many times in our lives.
in the essence of calling it poetry:as poets here want to ask for honesty about their writings...i feel this could be a rough draft for a poem down the line.
alot of times when we are angry and mad we tend not to think poetically, but as having been instructed here on ap, and having previously been a moderator at one point, have been told it is good to be honest with writers so that they may improve down the road at a later time.
either way it goes, best of luck on releasing your emotions. the one thing we all have to learn is patience in life. the second thing is how to hold onto our own sanity. life has its way of screwing with us. welcome to the site by the way. i noticed you are new a little bit.
the line i enjoyed reading the most was:
-You dance around my personal space
Like a demon- -
I've had that exact experience with my ex fiance.
I understand how you feel. -
"You pick and pick and pick at my faults
Only to hide your own shortcomings"
- So much truth to that last verse.
I can truely relate to piece having been picked on my whole life, even now to this day people still try to do it and its like wtf.
great use of emotion and I really enjoyed the imagery you created with this line
"You're nothing but a wolf in sheep's clothing"
wonderfully done =)
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