I can burn through the sky
I will burn through your mind
Trace me like a line
and I'll take what's mine
Watch me burn
until there's nothing left to see
I know you won't help
but solitary's fine with me
Cause I can burn up to the sky
and don't you dare ask why
Author notes
Not my greatest-and I doubt I'll win-but it was a cool topic, and it got me back into the flow.
A contest entry
- burning through the clouds by JinSays.
906 points, ended April 6, 38 entries
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Comments
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I liked it too. I really love the rebelliousness of this write.
Damn, but it reminds me that I was once young and so optimistic. Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, and I wish you all the best.
Love,
jin
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Hey thanks a lot. Those words mean a lot coming from a writer like you.
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