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Sunset

lava flowing clouds
scorch across dark twilight sky
day's grand finale

tall trees await night
black against bright burning clouds
sizzling in heaven

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  • Mercury Rising
    March 31
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    Some really terrific imagery in this little fiery vignette. Keep up the wonderful works.