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I'd be a brilliant poet if I could remember
What I was thinking of minutes ago
Instead I'm drunk at the end of December
With no work, and no songs to show

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  • FunnelWaxFate
    March 31
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    Ha! Excessively relatable. Love the sort of salty Bukowski feeling to this. Splendid.


  • HugsForEveryone
    March 31
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    awww that's so great! Hate when that happens. ^-^