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Bad Advice

Drown upun milky green grass
A best at heart
get up

suns burning
ashes combine
run away

stamped and forgoten
again
go away

throw it up
not your insides
get a life

stop repeating
the sky is blue
crazy soul

flee from your dog
not mine
leave alone

pick up your life
grrrrrrrr
fend back

I'm bored
this is meaningless


Then stop reading this poem!

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