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It Doesn't Hurt

I know it doesn’t hurt him,
The way it hurts me.
I know his heart didn’t shatter,
The way mine did.
I know when I look in his eyes,
That he wants me to disappear.
I know that things will never be the same again.
I know that he never even loved me.

I used to think that being nothing was good,
Because it lasted forever.
It kills to be a something,
Who falls into a nothing,
Because of someone else.

He says it wasn’t for her,
But I cannot believe.
Two days and five “I love you, baby” s later
And he's with her.
I can't help but wonder,
How many did he say to her?

Maybe it just pains me to remember his lips on mine,
And know that soon she may have the same memory.
Maybe it’s because it pains me to remember his embrace,
And know that soon she will remember it as well.
Maybe it’s because I miss his hand in mine,
And the attention, the hanging on my words,
Maybe I just miss him.

So, yes, I miss you, in case you started to care.
And yes, I still love you, and I know you’ll never care.
And yes, I have to say goodbye to you, with things I thought I knew.
And yes, I will go now,
Because I don’t want to see the look in your eyes,
Telling me to say goodbye.

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  • The Nose
    September 5
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    YAY! A KICKS ASS!
    This thing rocks


  • DeSiBoO14
    April 1

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    I lUv dIs!!I kAn ReLaTe 2DiS!!i HAD iThAppEn 2Me NoT tOo LoNg AgO!!n Yes It HuRtS sOO Muh InO eXaCtLy HoW u fEeL!!gReaT jOb!!KeEp Up Da GuD wRiTeS!!cHeCk OuT mY pOeMs 2!!

    • Thanks, I figured a lot of people could relate. But for future reference, not to be rude, but could you StOp DoInG tHiS? It hurts my eyes. thanks =)

  • Kyy
    March 31

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    this poem is good but in all honesty some part are not even necessary.
    to make this an excellent peice dont tell all your thoughts instead shorten it up a bit with as little detail as possible.
    this topic is extremly relateable especially to me.
    and i would love to read something that i can nod my head to.
    for example "now i know this poem says immature"
    thats awkward.
    and its ok i this is how you feel.
    when a poet writes they write everything.
    just be sure to proof read and doing some ctting of unimportant things that stray the reader.
    you need something to draw the reader in wit imagery and descriptive to the point details.
    hope this helps.

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