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The Soft Rose

Beautiful red,
How delicate indeed,
A symbol of love,
That is agreed.

Soft and delicate,
So lovely it's true,
It's a perfect way of I saying,
That I love you.

 

You beautiful little flower,

A romantic one you be,

So romantic indeed,

I write a poem for thee.

 

Soft and danty,

Like a butterfly perched upon you,

Sucking the sweet nectar,

The sweet nectar, has been drew.

 

Lovingly and all,

Cherry red like a caring heart,

Truly you are,

A peice of God's art.

 

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I made this for a contest and I felt like writing something soft and beautiful.

A contest entry

A soft poem, do you think?

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  • ArtemisWolf
    June 19

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    It's absoluetly beautiful!

    It's wonderful, and forgive the spelling mistakes. I can't seem to spell right today! I love it!

  • This is soft and beautiful for sure. I love it.
    Thanks very much for sharing. Excellent.
    Brian


    • GuitarBoy96
      April 2
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      Thank you,

      You know, you've been very supportive of my work, and I'd like to thank you for your kind comments and appreciation of my work. You truly are a kind fellow.


    • GuitarBoy96
      April 2
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      Thanks!

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