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my cave

I am a caveman
this is my cave
please behave
if you want to stay
no screaming hey
or have a bad day
no standing in the rain
don't come in if you are insane
or if your lame
I am a caveman
and I am just proper please behave

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  • MemeMassacre
    April 17
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    Gieco

    so easy a caveman can't do it
    unfortuneatly i can't its to expensive and i dont have a car therefore i do not need Gieco car insurance


  • chael
    April 1

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    I to am a caveman

    And I'm far from lame.But I love the rain and I'm quite insane. Still I'm well behaved. Am I welcome in your cave? I love this piece, a tip of my hat.....chael


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    April 1
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    HEHEHE this lifted me today :-) thankyou very much for your entry xx