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You have to find that out!

it'S been such a cold, long year.
so many emoTions,
so mAny days filled with tears.
so manY moments.

its been an exact year
since i first saW your face.
my heart filled wIth fear
that you'd vanish wiTHout a trace

that fear ate ME alive.
but you tAught me.
i learned hoW to strive.
you made me happy.

you made me smIle
you made me cry,
you sTayed a wHile.
you had to fly.

it's been such a wonderful year.
you stayed a while with ME.
you confirmed my greatest fear.
but you made everyone so Happy.

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“Been goin’ crazy from the moment I met you.”

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  • Awh, I can kinda relate to that, cause I've been through a hard breakup. I love your word choice as well. Thanks for entering and good luck.