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Zenith

 

 

 

bloodied shards
pierce the black

like last night’s pretence -


stripped away
by senses


bravado calmed by thought
passions ignited with touch
sensuality aroused within


the night our cover
lust and love
combined

 

 

 

pain and pleasure



zenith attained

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt is the picture.

20 - 50 words

37 words used

Credit ... image by Kosta Trimovsky-frontal cloud

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  • JinSays gold member
    April 6

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    Sue.
    Sigh.
    I sit here shaking my head, because anything I might want to say has been said by me so many times before. Just let me says thanks once again, your words so inspire me, always.
    Love,
    jin

  • Purrsanthema
    April 1
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    What a love poem! What a prompt! Wow! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • hawkeslake gold member
    March 31

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    OH WOW

    This is making my little heart thump! I love poems that compare passion to pictures like this, or the weather... (heehee, maybe something in my past????) Anyway, great! Lita


  • arafura gold member
    March 31
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    Great stuff. Very sensual indeed.

  • Bob Fox
    March 31
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    Poet

    that zenith. Complete ecstasy and peace. Wonderful thoughts. Sure beats painties on the head. lol


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 31

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    The picture of honey poured over hot coal fits your words to a tee

    I could not find a way into it, but I like this a lot

    Great stuff

    Jeff

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