Filtering through the pieces
of broken glass reflecting
who I was with you last year,
and the year before and
over the summer.
Connected to you- is hard
because you won't help me.
Every time I brush away the fuzzy prints
created by our memories - I wince
because everyone I believed I was
are now fragmented forever-
eternally divided along the lines
in time defined by us.
Author notes
Writing0Freedom
Blue\pink
13 or 11
Destiny - shattered- cerulean
A contest entry
- Rounds Contest Prelims - Prewrites/Freshwrites by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended April 16, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything W/ Emotion by Violent Glass.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow, great write! good luck in the contest!
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Some interesting word choices here.
Love your poem too, very intense and expressive and reminds me of something I'd write. -
I liked it, just not a winner
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woah, the last stanza is particullary amazing.
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Thank you! I wish I had half your talent... though...
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Pfft. as if.
I pretty much suck. Your poetry is quite enjoyable though, always thought-provoking. -
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Not even- your writing is amazing. The imagery is always mindblowing
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