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Tremulous Instrumentation

Play me like a concert violin,
And make me warm and horny like a flugel.
Rapidly attack my tom-tom skin,
Then mouth my piece and blow me like a bugle.

Triple tongue me like a fingered flute,
And make my sexy sax sound down and dirty.
Strum my strings just like a minstrel lute,
Then wind me up just like a hurdy-gurdy.

Wrap your lips around my licorice stick,
And lightly give my ivories a tickle,
Then thrill me like a little trilling lick
Played on a piccolo that’s plated nickel.

Make me vibrate like a kid’s kazoo,
And thrum me till I quiver like a lyre.
Pound me just like kettle drummers do,
Then turn my knob and crank my amplifier.

Slowly work me like a slide trombone,
And hog my microphone like Billy Corgan.
Squeeze and blow my bag-pipes till I moan,
Then ring my bells and really grind my organ.

Rattle my maracas so I shake,
And resonate my reeds until I’m humming.
Play me till I quaver and I quake,
And in a great crescendo I’ll be coming.



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Option # 3/ Prompt Sentence # 3) 'Play me like you play your violin.'

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  • Barry Hodges
    September 5

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    I remember being in a Spanish taverna and I watched the flamenco dancer playing with her partner's castanets when taking a rest between her numbers.

  • Ooooh indeed.
    There is someone I care for very much, who does this for me.


  • shiratikva
    April 12

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    I loved your great comparison with playing on musical instruments. It's a special erotic poem.
    "hog my microphone" - I loved it.
    Rhyming is wonderful too.


  • feetus
    April 5
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    Holy cow, this is clever! There's some off-the-wall instruments in there and unbelievable rhyme!