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I wish I could shed my skin, myself, me

she is the scabbed skin
you want to pick off  before its time is due
a tarnished restriction
the shade of umber
that is always cracked and damaged

she is the skin
you live in
the kind you can’t feel
but pray to shed
slip slither out of
white death
a netting of ugly

she is the voice inside your head
the one that isn’t ever happy
telling you
you are chained in materialism
and need
and want
more more more

you have never known her
but one day she will help you

crawl out of these demons.
crawl.

Author notes

Written as support for my woven textile collection.
My project was inspired by snakeskin and the fact that snakes shed their skin
almost every season. I began thinking about consumerism and how we are driven
to change our look every season. How most of us are always uncomfortable with
the way we look - and in a way 'wish we could shed our skin' to look like someone
else.

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  • tomisb
    April 1

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    Oh that balance between the world we manipulate and expect to feed us and the spiritual world that feeds our creativity and we to often strip mine instead of farm with our soul. Still your usual sharp insightful style.
    Love, Tom B.