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Fate Of The World

We pulse and throb,
Around ourselves.
A perfect correlation.
Twisted, hungry,
An angry mob,
Defines manifestation.
And shattered we all pull ourselves,
To deliberate complications.
The world has folded into itself,
Destined to damnation.

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  • Fire-Fly
    April 9

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    Interesting take on life.

    Like your layout and good use of language and flow.

    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Meroza
    March 31

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    An interesting and twisted poem indeed. Almost capturing me in its own mess of words

    Good luck


  • Jazzlyn
    March 31
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    Wow very strong
    and painted a big picture
    great write and it's true