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Astronauts





When night rolled around, we were all so spacey we felt like astronauts.

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  • Blushing rose
    April 22

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    I love the powerfl imagery in this one line. You have captred my attention with it.


  • HystericalHeart
    March 31

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    O.o Tis.. Interesting.. Very.. There. BAM! You know? Lol. Nice though. I joined the samed contest. Good luck to you! ^-^


  • Poetic Rage
    March 31

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    The spacey feeling wonder what caused it or even if there was a reason behind it. But you could feel the power of your words and the idea to this one liner!!

    Amazing!!