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My Wings, My Freedom

breaking me down slowly
day after day
i'm not me anymore
i've been changed in ways
that are completely irreversible
taken from me were the things
that i loved and needed
in order to be happy
i won't ever be the same again
for they've stripped me of my wings
my only sense of freedom
and they've thrown them away
they've set them free

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  • well lets see...i'll give you red bull that should give you wings! lol...anyway seriously it's a great write like always...it looks like none of us have been writting lately, but either way keep writting even if it's only in secert...we understand

  • wow carlie. i'm so happy your writing again... this is beautiful