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Feeling Like London

It’s a song by The Kinks
It’s a tube train that stinks
Of McDonalds, sweat and Lynx

It’s the undiscovered street
It’s the ache in my feet
It’s a Frank Sinatra beat

It’s the ever spinning eye
It’s the endless, leaden sky
It’s where moguls go to die

It’s the joy and the pain
It’s the loss and the gain
It’s dreams down the drain

It’s the great and the good
It’s the River Thames mud
It’s the wire in the blood

It’s the snarl of the cars
It’s the lights from the bars
It’s the haunts of the stars

It’s plush, penthouse suites
It’s sleepers in the streets
It’s the underground heat

It’s dreamers on the boards
It’s museums full of swords
It’s the gabble shop of lords

It’s within our reach art
It’s desperation for a start
It’s the offer from a tart

It’s the sights and the sounds
It’s a giant lost and found
It’s flesh sold by the pound

It’s the wave of a hand
It’s the good and the grand
It’s the Devil's Disneyland.

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  • Floorboards
    April 1

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    Quite a bouncy little number this, although the meter wasn't perfect, it didn't detract from my enjoyment of the poem, and yes, I suppose it is a bit of an urban disneyland, too an outsider anyway, don't know if the locals would agree!

    Anyway, a very worthy entry. Thanks for participating in our contest, much appreciated.

    Good luck!

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  • Emmyb gold member
    March 31

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    an urban disneyland? yes i suppose thats a way of seeing london!!! im guessing this is written by someone who lives here. really enjoyed this little rhyme!