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Sad Stories.

 

 

 

 

 

With a twinge in my stomach & silence echoing in this bedroom,
I read the sad stories that make tears trickle down my fevered checks.
I know you are only an hour away for a moment,
but it might as well be a century when I am not beside you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Candy Morphine
    March 31

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    I know you are only an hour away for a moment,
    but it might as well be a century when I am not beside you.
    -Gahh, just break my heart with beautiful words why dont you?


  • an.unheard.cry
    March 31
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    i love this
    its a beautiful write


  • righteousme
    March 31
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    oh. that last line took me there . and dropped me off . longing and the space between ...


  • Atrophya
    March 31
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    im sorry my story made you cry! =[