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Remarkable Creatures

Remember

Each passing thought

Masking clouds in the mirror

And then

Remember

Kissing ghosts from the past

And then

Blackness covers the eyes

Love lost

Each fantasy

 

Childlike

Reality

Each passing moment

And to

Think

Unreality becomes

Reservoirs

Each tear

Some sort of reality

 

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  • Patpowers silver member
    April 4

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    Great work again here Rev! I enjoy your acrostics. THANKS again for your latest one!


  • HaleyMary
    March 31

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    This is beautiful, William. Especially the last stanza. It makes me think of life being dream-like and of a feeling of almost floating. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary


  • The Blue Lamp Post silver member
    March 31

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    A nicely written acrostic. I tend to think that people do not give enough credit to what can be done with acrostic and how truly versatile a form it is.

    I enjoyed this. Thank you. ~The Blue Lamp Post