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Riches Among The Ruins

Right now we should all pray
I see the darkest of clouds hanging overhead
Caught in middle
Hanging by a thread
Each collapsing stock
Sadness dwells

America third world
Money worthless
Only forgotten
Nightmares
God help us

Time they say will prove
Help is on the way
Erupting into good fortune

Red lines will turn forever black
Understanding nothing
I see trillions of tears
Now isn't that
Sad

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  • Patpowers silver member
    April 4
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    How right you are Rev...true words from a great poet like you. THANKS!


  • HaleyMary
    March 31

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    Powerful write, William. I think this write says a lot about society. There are so many poor people in the world and I don't think the richer countries are doing enough to help others who are less fortunate. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary

  • amysticwriter silver member
    March 31
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    I too, see America as a third world...not too far away...In Jesus name I pray...